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Entries from September 2007

Book Talk: Lisa Hurley Downer

September 28, 2007 · 3 Comments

Today, I’m happy to welcome Lisa Hurley Downer, a writer and performing artist who combines her passion for writing, music and performing. She’s also my sister and is about to publish her first book, Caribbean Love.

Lisa Downer, poet and songwriter

Hi Lisa, Welcome to Sharon’s Writing Lab. Can you tell us a little bit about yourself?

Hey Sharon. I am a writer and performance poet. I really enjoy being able to express both sides of my personality: the hermit and the “attention-seeker”, if you will.

What inspires your poetry?

I usually write when I am very moved about something – it expresses some extreme emotion. Most of my poems are about love in one way or another. Romantic love, (good and bad), love between sisters, love between friends, self-love, spiritual love…I am inspired by that search for or experience of connection.

There are times, though when I am in a playful mood and will just write for the joy of exploring a particular poetic form. I love haiku, for example. I am naturally a bit verbose, so I enjoy the discipline of limiting myself in order to achieve fullest expression.

I am also a songwriter, which of course feeds naturally into my poetry. Sometimes I hear a rhythm in my head and write a poem to the beat.


Tell us a bit about your book.

My book, Caribbean Love, is a poetry-novel that describes my love-journey through life. It starts with poems about the relationship between me and my Dad (serious “daddy issues”) in order to establish the foundation for all of my romantic missteps. Beats therapy, I guess. :) From there, it traces my passage from an unhealthy obsession with finding “the one”, through a process of self-discovery and self-acceptance, and finally achieving a healthy, happy relationship…with myself.

What makes it unique is that instead of merely including my poems, I also provide the back story and context for them, so that readers get immediate insight into the “why” of the work. I have read many poetry collections and loved the work, but always wondered where the author’s head (or heart) was at when writing. What were they going through? Why are rotting apples, or whatever, a recurring motif? By creating a framework on which the poems stand, I answer those questions and make it easier for readers to connect with the poetry.

Where did you come up with your title?

While the title is not yet final, I came up with Caribbean Love because it captures my theme (Love) and my origins, both of which are vitally important to me. It’s the title of one of my favourite poems as well, and captures a time of joy, self-acceptance and connection to family.

Do you have a favourite poem or series of poems from your book?

I recently started a blog, on which I’ve posted a few of my favourites. If I had to pick just one, though, it would probably be “The Feast”, because it crystallizes the moment when I see and accept the truth about the relationships I’ve been involved in, and the men I’ve attracted. More importantly, it is a warning to other women for what to look out for, or avoid. So it’s basically a “community service” poem. Most importantly, it has edge. Some love poems can be a bit too sappy. This one has a bite to it.

Are you planning more books?

Definitely! I have a book planned with my sister, who is an excellent writer and poet herself. We have written a few poems together, and actually wrote oodles of limericks together when were growing up. I am really looking forward to that project. I also have a stage play in the works, as well as a novel and another book of poetry. So it’s going to be a busy, but very creatively fulfilling time.

When and how do you write? What’s your process and when’s your best writing time?

I often get random snippets coming to me in the middle of the day, kind of out of nowhere. Sometimes I will see something on TV, read a book, or hear a song that touches me…and I’m off and running. So I can write at any time. However, my best writing time is between 2:00 and 6:00 a.m. I’ll just jump up out of bed with the words kind of rushing out of my head and my hand trying to keep up. These poems tend to be my most resonant and truthful. They often come out fully formed with little revising needed. It’s actually a beautiful, spiritual and intensely satisfying process.

Who or what is your best source of inspiration or advice when writing?

Life – either mine or my friends’. People do some crazy stuff to each other in the name of love.

What’s the best advice you have received about writing or publishing?

Two things. The first was from my Dad, who told me “Do not self-edit. Just write and get something down on the page.” That has really helped… Another poet also recently advised me to be true to my vision for my work and never, never waver from it.

Tell us one thing about yourself that you haven’t yet revealed in an interview.

Even though I am a performer and love being on stage, I have a very shy, quiet side.

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Writing News Is An Art

September 27, 2007 · Leave a Comment

Well, some people think so. It’s a skill you can learn and in The Art Of Writing News, my guest post on Daily Writing Tips, I tell you how to do it:

News writing is a key skill for journalists, but it helps with other types of writing as well. That’s because news writing is about telling a story quickly and concisely. Anyone can learn to do this, with a bit of help. Here’s how you can write the news and get your story across. The technique also works well for writing press releases.

Check out the site. It’s got writing tips from lots of writers with expertise in different areas.

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Ritz Crackers And Inner Peace

September 25, 2007 · 1 Comment

Could Ritz Crackers be the key to Inner Peace? is the latest from the Blissful Thinking blog. The title cracked me up, but as I read the post, I found myself identifying with the sentiments expressed. I, too like, to have time to hear my own thoughts and to lie in quiet contemplation – and I love Ritz crackers too. Lisa asks you what gives you inner peace. Why not stop by and answer?

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Caribbean Love

September 21, 2007 · 1 Comment

This is the last in my series of poems from Lisa Hurley Downer. If you’ve been enjoying her work, you can see more of it on the Blissful Thinking blog. I’ll be featuring an interview with Lisa soon.

Lisa Downer, poet and songwriter

Caribbean Love

Blazing sun
Pumping beat
Congo drum
Now you have no choice: you move your feet
Rhythmic dance
Sweet cadance
Carnival prance
Now you know you’re in the Caribbean
A certain flair
Je ne sais quoi
It’s in the air
When you’re here you feel so young and free
Tinkling sound
Ting, tang, tung
Steel pan drum
That’s what the Caribbean means to me

The beauty of
The scenery
Blue skies above
Every bird, every mahogany
Sweet sugar cane
Torrential rain
Even hurricanes
Integral part of the Caribbean scene
Molasses, rum,
From sugar come
Cockspur fun
All this makes here more dear to me
No matter where
I go this year
I’m coming back
Back to my islands in the Caribbean

It’s in the women
It’s in the men
We are so proud
Of this region we will never leave
We care our kids
We love our grands
Community:
That is what keeps us going—we believe
No better place
Exists on earth
We’re here to stay
We are so lucky this is where we live
A paradise
Right here on earth
You have no choice
But to stay and live Caribbean love

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Wicked Words

September 20, 2007 · 6 Comments

Words are funny things. Take the word ‘wicked’ for example. When I was growing up, anything that was wicked was evil and best avoided. All the stepmothers in the fairy tales were wicked, as well as a handful of goblins and elves. So when did the word ‘wicked’ start to mean good or even fantastic? You hear people saying: ‘I scored some Wicked tickets for next week’s gig!’ I love etymology, so I’d be interested to hear if anyone knows the answer.

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Peace and Satisfaction

September 19, 2007 · 4 Comments

Here’s another great poem from Lisa Hurley Downer.

Lisa Downer, poet and songwriter

Peace and Satisfaction

Help me go inside
The stillness in my mind
What do I fear to find?
Your Peace

But yet, how can I fear
Your Love, so close, so dear
What do I fear to hear?
Your Voice

But how can I run from
The unity of One
The soul continuum
So deep?

Cannot run, cannot hide
Cannot move, can’t decide
Neither passion, pain, nor pride
Is strong enough
To stop Your Love
To hide Your Love
To push Your Love
Away
To keep my soul
From being whole
To push Your Love
Away

What’s mine, what’s mine:
Your Love Divine
It’s mine, it’s mine
Your Love Divine
I claim, proclaim
My Joy, Your Name
My God,
You satisfy me.

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Book Talk: Marina Kuperman

September 17, 2007 · 2 Comments

Today we’re joined by Marina Kuperman, author of Turtle’s Feet, Surfer’s Beat.

Turtle Feet, Surfer's Beat cover

Hi Marina, Welcome to Sharon’s Writing Lab. Can you tell us a little bit about yourself?

Hi, thanks for having me! I guess you can sum me up this way: I’m an expat mom from the US living in Costa Rica.

What inspired you to write Turtle Feet, Surfer’s Beat?

My family and I went to visit Tamarindo beach and went on the Leatherback turtle night tour. Until you see this creature first hand, you can’t really understand the magnitude of it. But once I saw this giant, something stirred inside of me and on top of that I found out that they are the most endangered marine animals on earth, I felt I had to do something. I have a son who is 3 and I really want him to see this animal in its natural habitat! So, I tried to think of ways that I can help, but not stop at only me, but rather get the word out. I always loved the young adult genre because you can have so much fun writing for them, and that’s when it hit me. Write an adventurous, yet educational book for them!

Tell us a bit about the book.

The book revolves around a typical suburban teen girl, Penelope, from the States that is forced to go to Costa Rica with her parents for her father’s job assignment. Involuntarily, her parents sign up Penelope and her little brother to spend two weeks at the Leatherback turtle biological station (for ‘their own good’). Penelope, obviously isn’t pleased but forgives the horrid accommodations and the never ending bug brigade as she sees the turtle and instantly pledges to do all she can to help it from extinction. But hang ten, dudes! Penelope is about to get help. One lonely night, as she’s patrolling the beach for turtle poachers she stumbles and falls directly into the arms of the local surf champ. Together they dive into the world of surfing and marine preservation.

Who’s your favourite character in it and why?

Penelope by far. She is your typical spoiled girl who knows nothing outside of her jock boyfriend, her girlfriends, fashion and malls. And then she gets introduced to this turtle. Something dramatic happens to her and she starts to look at life differently.

Where did you come up with your title, and did your publisher allow you to keepthe title you originally wanted?

I just thought the title was so appropriate to the scene. The turtles and surfers share the same beach. I’m self-publishing, which is great because I have full control!

Have you started another book?

Yes, it’s about a gifted handicapped girl who is a skateboarder, and the story how she beats all odds and makes it in a male dominant sport as an amputee.

Do you plan to write more books on this subject?

I hope so! I plan on continuing the Turtle Feet, Surfer’s Beat series with other locations and other marine problems.

When and how do you write? What’s your process and when’s your best writing time?

I get my best writing done in the early mornings. My mind is fresh with ideas and I can simply get as many words out as possible. Then, life sets in. I have to take care of my son and other stuff. So when I finally have the time to sit back to write, I basically edit what I wrote in the morning. This helps keep the flow of my writing.


Who or what is your best source of inspiration or advice when writing?

Ironically, what inspires me most is reading how other famous writers started out and their long journeys to getting published and recognition. Their perseverance fuels my ambitions and reminds me what a tough industry this is, and to keep moving.

What’s the best advice you have received about writing or publishing?

Don’t ever ever stop following your dreams and goals. If this is what you truly want, then go for it!

Tell us one thing about yourself that you haven’t yet revealed in an interview.

Funnily enough, my book is only a tiny fraction of my inspiration, it’s kind of a spring board for the community www.turtlefeetsurfersbeat.com I’m developing online for kids and their parents to join forces with surfers, musicians, artists, specialists and everyone else who is already helping to make a difference. I want to use a different approach, by promoting fun with conservation.

Thanks so much for having me here with you today, and I hope you all come and join in the fun and help out our oceans!

Sharon’s Writing Lab will be reviewing Turtle Feet, Surfers Beat in the near future.

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Unfinished Poem

September 16, 2007 · Leave a Comment

Sometimes you start a poem and don’t know how to finish it. In this case I was given a phrase and tried to build a poem around it, but this short snippet is as far as I got.

Whirr! Whirr! Whirr!
Go the ceiling fans
I look to the sky
And make some plans

I guess this one will go on my ‘to do’ list for sometime in the future.

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Diamond Ditty

September 14, 2007 · 2 Comments

Another entry in the ’shallow but fun’ stakes:

Diamond Rings

I want lots of diamonds, diamond rings.
I need to be surrounded by beautiful things.
When I see fine jewels my heart sings.
I simply cannot help it; I just love those blings
Cover me with diamonds, shower me with gold
Fill my home with presents, whether new or old.
But most of all remember above all things
I want a lot of diamonds, diamond rings.

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Dripping, Tripping, Slipping

September 10, 2007 · 2 Comments

I decided to try a different take on my most recent assignment. A short poem. Just as Paddington was a bear of very little brain, this may be a poem of very little worth, but I present it nonetheless. It’s called Dripping, Tripping, Slipping

Kitchen faucets
Dripping, dripping
While my mind is
Tripping, tripping
Every drop drills through my brain
Plumber must come out again
Puddles causing
Slipping, slipping
While the tap is dripping, dripping

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