Originally published May 31, 2007 on Communati
My daughter is four (or four and a half as she insists). This morning she ‘wrote’ this song. All I did was write it down – the words are hers.
I wish I lived in the sky
I wish I lived in the sky
But we are human beings
So we don’t live in the sky
If I was in a flying boat
I could jump onto the moon
I suspect that she’s been influenced by my hubby’s love of the Beatles.
6 responses so far ↓
Donna Sundblad // May 8, 2008 at 2:07 pm |
That’s great Sharon. My 11-year-old grandson enjoys writing poetry. He has one humorous poem that makes me smile every time I hear it, and I’m encouraging him to enter it in a contest.
Donna
Casey Quinn // May 16, 2008 at 2:16 am |
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Steph // May 16, 2008 at 6:45 pm |
That is so cute. And disconcertingly deep for a four-year-old. I’m impressed.
Josh Spoehr // May 20, 2008 at 12:37 am |
Yeah I would say a bit less yellow submarine and a bit more Dora?
Sharon // May 22, 2008 at 7:58 pm |
Thanks, everyone. I’m very proud of her. She has kept on writing since – I’ve got a couple of short stories that she has dictated to me.
Rubul // November 9, 2008 at 11:27 am |
simply great!